First Draft of “The Cabo Contract” is Done and Revision is Underway!
Posted by Chris Broyhill on Dec 19, 2011 in Blog | 0 comments
Hello Everyone,
As you may have noticed if you’ve been following me on Facebook or Twitter, I finished the first draft of Colin Pearce’s second adventure, “The Cabo Contract” at about 2am last Thursday morning. Now comes the most difficult part of writing, in my opinion, the read-through and revision process.
For me, writing a story is a dynamic process. While I start a novel with a vision of how it will end, I let the characters tell me who they are and I also let them decide what they’re going to do. This can result in some significant surprises. Very often, as the author, I’ll be typing along quite merrily and suddenly I’ll realize that something is going to happen that I didn’t anticipate. Or, I can have a specific idea for the manner in which a scene will play out in my mind and then when I get to the actual “creation” phase, it will go in an entirely different direction. When I’m all finished with the writing though, I have to go back and make sure the “set up” for all the characters and events matches the outcome. In order to avoid continuity errors, something that readers hate, I have to be very anal about the details.
At this point, I’m about halfway through the revision process and I’m fine tuning conversations, CIA emails and words here and there to make things flow. I’m also looking hard about what this story will say about Colin Pearce and ensure it’s consistent both with who I know him to be and who the readers expect him to be.
I’m predicting that I’ll have the first revision completed by Christmas. After that comes the read through and some final tightening up, and then it’s off to my “test readers” for their input. Once I get their input back, I’m sure additional changes will be in order and then it will be off to the publisher, probably some time in late January.
In this latest adventure, the reader will learn more about Colin Pearce’s dark side as well as his sense of duty and his dedication to someone he feels very strongly about. There are also not one, but two villains and a plot that hopefully will draw the reader in and not let go until he or she is finished reading.
More updates to come!
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The Cabo Contract to be finished by December 31st!
Posted by Chris Broyhill on Nov 28, 2011 in Blog | 1 comment
Many of you have told me you can’t wait for Colin Pearce’s second adventure, The Cabo Contract, to be completed. Although I’ve had the manuscript for this book about two-thirds finished for over a year, I haven’t had the time to finish it with PhD studies, a FAA research project, work issues and real life to contend with.
I’m happy to say that I have cleared my calendar for December and the manuscript will be completed by the end of the year. In fact, I’ve already finished the chapter of the MS where I had stopped writing and that chapter has taken some twists and turns that I didn’t expect!
This book will show the reader a lot more of Colin Pearce’s dark side as well as his capability to rise above it when required.
Are you looking for page turning action? You’ll have it.
Are you looking for riveting flying scenes? You’ll have those too!
And will Colin Pearce fare well with the ladies? The answer to that question is a resounding yes but the format in which that action takes place will be somewhat surprising – both to the reader and to CP himself.
I’ll be selecting a very few, very select “test readers” to look over the manuscript and to provide input prior to sending it to the publisher. If you’re interested, let me know!
And now, onward and upward!
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